Once Upon A Time (Reisa Caroline)

The ending of this story is so surprising because I thought that it would be about the happy family where the man, the wife, and the boy lived happily ever after like another bed time story. Actually it is not only the ending which so surprising but also the whole story. The first thing in my head when I heard about bed time story is fun and full of imagination because I think a bed time story should be a beautiful story so the children or the reader will have a beautiful dream with full of imagination too.

            In this story, the man and the wife are too careful, overprotected, and maybe too paranoid. I don’t really understand why they do that. In my opinion, this story is too scary and not too good for a bed time story.

            From the 1^st-8^th paragraph is an opening story which tells us what’s the reason why the writer wrote this story, if the story without 1^st-8^th paragraph can be a good story maybe because they do not have any relation with the next paragraph until end.